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03-15-2015, 10:12 AM

(03-15-2015, 09:48 AM)71degrees Wrote: Love it!

It is so cold
this day her lips - shouldn't this be lip's or lips' ?
imprint freezes
on my cheek

I rub it
for luck

Warm sentiment conveyed with cold words. Well done.
Paul

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Irish - by 71degrees - 03-15-2015, 09:48 AM

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