03-14-2015, 03:54 AM
(03-14-2015, 03:36 AM)shemthepenman Wrote:Ha, two mod warnings is either a ban or a welcome to the club, and lacan's still here.(03-14-2015, 12:52 AM)lacan123 Wrote: Thanks Milo - how do I move the thread to the discussion forum? I.e. is there a way to move the contents of it?Oh my, two mod warnings, you're in trouble now, son
Erthona - thanks your comment. Of course I'm open to critique - but I wanted to check I was receiving factually accurate critique. You originally wrote "The first stanza is in common meter. Alternating lines of iambic tetrameter and iambic trimeter." What I was humbly questioning was whether it does in fact alternate "lines of iambic tetrameter and iambic trimeter". It doesn't seem to.
In any case, is there a way, Moderator, to move the thread, lock stock, to the more appropriate forum?
I'm very keen to learn more about meter etc.Talk about getting off on the wrong foot. Fucking around with metre in Serious is like fucking with people's emotions.

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