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Asking a girl to dance
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03-13-2015, 02:22 PM
The ideas of the poem were very clearly communicated. However, the word choice and form felt inexperienced and lazy. I didn't believe you when you said, "These warriors of the night, These champions of the floor," It felt cheesy. You hadn't convinced me yet. While I understood exactly what you were saying, I wasn't sold.
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Asking a girl to dance - by Martyl - 05-10-2014, 05:10 AM
RE: Asking a girl to dance - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 06:02 AM
RE: Asking a girl to dance - by first_high_of_the_day - 03-13-2015, 02:22 PM
RE: Asking a girl to dance - by LorettaYoung - 03-17-2015, 12:15 AM
RE: Asking a girl to dance - by summermoose - 03-18-2015, 05:49 AM
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