10 Years

[10BIT]

I overall enjoyed your poem!
But I actually am slightly put off by the rythm.
While the poem itself very well shows how one deals with regret, it is very hard to read as
the rythm causes me to loose interest in reading

I especially noticed this in the first stanza:

10 years long, and short
to dread, rage again
against the well within
deep, unforgiving,
forgive me, I go on

I am uncertain wether it actually is the rythm or the alliterations used which cause this feeling...
anyways i do feel like this poem is well thought out.

Thanks for sharing.