"Good Morning, How Are you?"

[Magpie]

I like the title and the fact that it plays a lead role in the piece. I appreciate the irony of the long first sentence. It works well, especially with "monotonous" to confirm.
I'm not sure by my read that "luxury" is the right word. Feels like it should be "hope" or "chance". - but that would mess with the syntax a little.
Also wish the word "drone" was in here somewhere. Haha
Good read,
Paul

Hi Paul,

Thanks for reading, you are right about "luxury", in fact I'm not sure any of that Russian roulette line should be in at all, I think I just liked the sound of it. Which would make space for your 'drone' idea, which I really like, there's a few possibilities I'm thinking on at the moment and when I've settled on one I will edit accordingly.

Cheers for the idea,

Mark