03-09-2015, 07:34 AM
Nothing to say or add beyond - no crit.
Clean and crisp - I like it.
(The last line oddly reminded me of rowens on a good day - it makes a sort of disconnected sense, that manages to communicate on levels way beyond the complexity of what is actually written)
Clean and crisp - I like it.
(The last line oddly reminded me of rowens on a good day - it makes a sort of disconnected sense, that manages to communicate on levels way beyond the complexity of what is actually written)