03-07-2015, 09:34 PM
Hi Keith,
remeber the original posting of this one and still like the word sounds and associations for images.
You have given this a totally different feel to the one I got from the read. I got a jig jog scamper when I first read this, your music has given it a slightly drugged, other world air to it. (Just how much talk sniffing was undertaken in the production of this one?)
Nearly lost me with the heavy monotone voice by the end of the second stanza, but then it got to me and I had a reversal and decided I love it.
AJ
Ps also loved your last one, sorry not got to commenting - thought it was very vivid images and the cynical twist at the end spot on.
remeber the original posting of this one and still like the word sounds and associations for images.
You have given this a totally different feel to the one I got from the read. I got a jig jog scamper when I first read this, your music has given it a slightly drugged, other world air to it. (Just how much talk sniffing was undertaken in the production of this one?)
Nearly lost me with the heavy monotone voice by the end of the second stanza, but then it got to me and I had a reversal and decided I love it.
AJ
Ps also loved your last one, sorry not got to commenting - thought it was very vivid images and the cynical twist at the end spot on.