03-07-2015, 04:08 AM
(03-07-2015, 12:55 AM)Leah S. Wrote: LovelyThanks for reading and commenting - a cistern is a water tank, used here more particularly for the tank above the toilet pedestal that holds the flushing water. http://www.wickes.co.uk/Products/Bathroo.../c/1001017
(03-06-2015, 05:13 AM)just mercedes Wrote: malfunctioning lightsCan't think of anything else. Really like the last three lines. Carry on. Leah
whine and flicker
off once-white tiles
a drop of blood
falls from your nostril
in slow motion, exploding
small puffs of powder
from the off-white line
on the cistern To me, a cistern is a water-tank, usually large and outdoors. Since you had already put me in a sleazy public bathroom, I had to assume it was a sink, but it really halted the flow.
heavy gravity
in the v of dive;
it’s happy hour
