friend or foe

[Moose]

Friend or foe
Don't you know
Love is weird
Typically feared
Take my call
IM giving you my all
You are the one
The one for me
Can't you see
What we have
Is so much fun
There's never enough
Enough of the sun
Times always on the run
Its always tough
Never understood why
Why its so rough
Whenever we say goodbye

Hi SameName,
I am very new to this so please forgive any lack of finesse on my part.
I really liked the punchy-ness of the short lines.
I read an ambiguity in the narrator's relationship to their muse (is this love requited?) which I did enjoy. I think adding content reflecting the muses feelings towards the narrator would add counterweight that would make the underlying sentiment clearer and give the whole a better balance.

Other than that I agree with all the other observations made so far. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to seeing how this poem evolves.