3-3-15 'Ku

[Tiger the Lion]

hats and mittens
drying on the radiator,
the smell of cocoa

Ah, you've changed it. I was going to say that I liked the use of the word 'mittens' and that it added quite a lot to the ku. I'm not sure of your reasons for changing it, but I think I prefer it with mittens.

Also if I'm not mistaken was the original "hats and mittens", in which case a completely different picture has been painted altogether.

Mark

Thanks Mark. I have been flip-flopping on that first line all day. I wasn't sure if the sonics of "hats and mittens" was too much. Credit for tipping the scales back to the original. And thanks for the careful reading.
Paul