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Red White and Blue
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03-02-2015, 04:17 PM
You show a military funeral, and leave your readers to supply their own responses to the sadness. I like the way the flag is a major part of the poem, more so than the (presumed) widow. At least, I'm supposing that the shoulders belong to a human, and not a personification of the flag. I think your way of dealing with this subject is very effective.
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Red White and Blue - by Deadrise - 03-02-2015, 08:56 AM
RE: Red White and Blue - by SameName - 03-02-2015, 12:00 PM
RE: Red White and Blue - by Deadrise - 03-02-2015, 12:37 PM
RE: Red White and Blue - by just mercedes - 03-02-2015, 04:17 PM
RE: Red White and Blue - by hopefularahant - 03-03-2015, 02:36 AM
RE: Red White and Blue - by Deadrise - 03-03-2015, 04:37 AM
RE: Red White and Blue - by just mercedes - 03-03-2015, 04:50 AM
RE: Red White and Blue - by Deadrise - 03-03-2015, 04:53 AM
RE: Red White and Blue - by Erthona - 03-03-2015, 10:40 PM
RE: Red White and Blue - by 10BIT - 03-13-2015, 06:52 AM
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