Experimenting

[Magpie]

Excellent, I like it.

And not that I want to change it at all, but I couldn't help noticing that with a bit tinkering you could make the last two lines have 6 syllables each to go with the 6 syllables in the 1st line.

I just like the idea of one of those misguided haiku 'purist' counter of syllables counting them out and then exploding at the realisation of 666.

It would make me so happy.

Thanks for the read,

Mark