There's this girl I'd like to write about

There's this girl I'd like to write about

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02-28-2015, 02:52 AM

Thanks all for your comments. I suppose I can be a bit chauvinistic at times. For the most part the responses this poem evokes are what I was going for. I'm happy with it, but I'll definitely consider editing in some suggestions.

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There's this girl I'd like to write about - by StanleyZ - 12-26-2014, 04:42 PM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by Brownlie - 12-27-2014, 12:25 AM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by 71degrees - 12-27-2014, 01:37 PM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by StanleyZ - 12-28-2014, 04:07 PM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by ABennett - 02-13-2015, 06:14 PM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by Vigilante Mugshot - 02-26-2015, 09:44 AM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by hopefularahant - 02-27-2015, 12:54 PM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by billy - 02-27-2015, 06:25 PM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by StanleyZ - 02-28-2015, 02:52 AM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by billy - 02-28-2015, 03:56 PM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by shemthepenman - 03-01-2015, 12:23 AM

RE: There's this girl I'd like to write about - by billy - 03-01-2015, 08:07 AM

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