02-25-2015, 08:39 PM
Love this, shit does stick to the sole.
If by any chance you were inspired by a thread on this site, there were some peeps accumulating four or five juicy critiques then deleting the thread rather than respond or edit. Some even reposted in a different forum as if the result would change. If you need a new thread deleted before it has replies just ask. Too late for this one though, you made something good of it.
If by any chance you were inspired by a thread on this site, there were some peeps accumulating four or five juicy critiques then deleting the thread rather than respond or edit. Some even reposted in a different forum as if the result would change. If you need a new thread deleted before it has replies just ask. Too late for this one though, you made something good of it.
(02-25-2015, 01:34 PM)rayheinrich Wrote: < i tried to delete this but the gods stopped me >
really!
oh fuck!
it's like trying to throw away a garbage can
when "they" assume it's what's inside that's garbage
right? shit... shit...
and the can gets left
that ragged old piece of trash gets left
"but", you say...
but
they've gone away
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