Do walls normally close?

[indarican]

Thank you all for your feedback, I can surely see how the poem could be broken down into smaller works. I didn't realize how long it was until it was completed.
Erthona- Thank you for you detailed critique of my work, i am sure that without it some of the obvious problems (obvious to me now..lol) would have gone unchanged. I will be rewritting this poem to work in some of the feedback and hopefully it will be better.

THANKS AGAIN!!!