passing me by
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(02-24-2015, 02:36 AM)indarican Wrote:  thank you all for the feedback. I will work on the cliches in my poetry. I have been writing for a long time but never really let any see or read my work so every ones feedback is appreciated!
Ahhhh yes....the infinite joy of writing in isolation Smile How wrong can you NEVER be!

I look forward to seeing your work on this one...grab that metaphor like a thief's hand on a Rolex!

Good egg,
tectak
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passing me by - by indarican - 02-19-2015, 08:41 PM
RE: passing me by - by Mitul Yadav - 02-19-2015, 11:35 PM
RE: passing me by - by indarican - 02-20-2015, 12:09 AM
RE: passing me by - by mongolfiere - 02-20-2015, 02:16 PM
RE: passing me by - by indarican - 02-20-2015, 10:38 PM
RE: passing me by - by tectak - 02-22-2015, 01:48 AM
RE: passing me by - by billy - 02-22-2015, 08:12 AM
RE: passing me by - by bena - 02-22-2015, 08:36 AM
RE: passing me by - by poe_enthusiast - 02-23-2015, 03:17 AM
RE: passing me by - by indarican - 02-24-2015, 02:36 AM
RE: passing me by - by tectak - 02-24-2015, 02:45 AM



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