passing me by

passing me by

poe_enthusiast
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#10

02-23-2015, 03:17 AM

I would have to agree with some of the other posts. I do think the poem is very vague but well done in the emotional aspect. Adding some concrete details and strong lines would really help this poem become something wonderful.

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passing me by - by indarican - 02-19-2015, 08:41 PM

RE: passing me by - by Mitul Yadav - 02-19-2015, 11:35 PM

RE: passing me by - by indarican - 02-20-2015, 12:09 AM

RE: passing me by - by mongolfiere - 02-20-2015, 02:16 PM

RE: passing me by - by indarican - 02-20-2015, 10:38 PM

RE: passing me by - by tectak - 02-22-2015, 01:48 AM

RE: passing me by - by billy - 02-22-2015, 08:12 AM

RE: passing me by - by bena - 02-22-2015, 08:36 AM

RE: passing me by - by poe_enthusiast - 02-23-2015, 03:17 AM

RE: passing me by - by indarican - 02-24-2015, 02:36 AM

RE: passing me by - by tectak - 02-24-2015, 02:45 AM

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