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A Simple, Separate Self
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02-23-2015, 03:05 AM
I found this poem very confusing. I wasn't entirely sure what was going on most of the time. I would suggest adding more clarity. You can do this through adding more description of what is going on around the speaker in the poem. This could help give the poem more substance while also allowing the reader to be able to understand all that is going on.
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A Simple, Separate Self - by alatos - 02-22-2015, 02:07 AM
RE: A Simple, Separate Self - by Magnum - 02-22-2015, 03:54 AM
RE: A Simple, Separate Self - by kreichert - 02-22-2015, 07:49 AM
RE: A Simple, Separate Self - by alatos - 02-23-2015, 02:26 AM
RE: A Simple, Separate Self - by poe_enthusiast - 02-23-2015, 03:05 AM
RE: A Simple, Separate Self - by tomcrocus - 02-23-2015, 03:12 AM
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