02-23-2015, 01:48 AM
Hi cidermaid
Thanks (I think...) for the comments. Sorry you couldn't find anything positive to say about the poem. It's really just intended to be something that presents a strange, unfamiliar image. It's interesting that you pointed out your confusion over bray/bleat - a lot of people have mentioned that to me. I don't feel any real need to edit or revise this one.
Thanks (I think...) for the comments. Sorry you couldn't find anything positive to say about the poem. It's really just intended to be something that presents a strange, unfamiliar image. It's interesting that you pointed out your confusion over bray/bleat - a lot of people have mentioned that to me. I don't feel any real need to edit or revise this one.