A Simple, Separate Self

[kreichert]

Having taught English to Seniors in high school, I can say that I have seen the vacuous eyes and sameness you describe in lines 4-8. I see the four-walled description more limiting than a long hallway. It seems more attuned to a room than a hallway but then where do you fit 100 students. I would continue to explore the students as you describe them rather than yourself. Since Walter would be dismayed at them, that is where I would spend my time. kr