Pleasant Dreams

[leftovernachos]

Come sit here closely by my side
as I unzip my soul for you.
is this implying your soul lives behind a zipper, or is this an innuendo?
And take a hold with your warm hand,
and stroke these arms that reach for you.

And if you swallow all that I’ve said
I’ll realize you understand.

As I thrust deep inside your mind
you’ll come to see I was the man.Oh, it's all innuendo...

That you had hoped would come with you
on this a journey hard and long.

As you had hoped would never end
and felt my true love growing strong.No, it's a romance?

And as we seek another road
I will try harder to unload

More than I have for you today
and not to leave and go astray.all of this rhyming is a little uncomfortable....

Until my passion does explode
in many warm unending streams.   More innuendo??

Of words I hope will once again
fulfill your wish of pleasant dreams.

I think this mixes two different aspects of a relationship that are very very different, and generally are not on a person's mind at the same time, it seems like you're writing to a girl about your feelings for her which are dominated by physical desire... Makes me feel awful inside. Disgusting. I'd try to convey one message if I were you, then convey the other in another poem... but then again, what do I know... the writing feels fake all through it, like the intent is not so much to express love as it is to win over a sexual partner...