02-20-2015, 05:14 AM
(02-16-2015, 06:03 AM)just mercedes Wrote: Out of chaos the shameless gather I don't know what the 'shameless' look like.
around death, take over neglected ground I don't know what 'death' looks like, unless it's the guy in the black robe with the sickle.
and vanish as smoke, flashing Those unvisualized Shameless just morphed in my mind into minions with tiny flashing exit signs.
small exit signs, squatting above altars. What are they doing while they are squatting there....? It only took me one guess.
The leaden trumpet never sounds What's a leaden trumpet, Precious?
in league with the light unknown. Who is in league with the unknown light, the trumpet?
In New York those twin towers showed "Those" ? Or "the" ?
faded caves, temporary shadows. AS " faded caves" ? Or were they exhibiting faded caves and temporary shadows ?
Yesterday deprivation arrived, diffident, I don't know what diffident deprivation looks like.
inclusive in its slow pace, out of vertical Inclusive of what?
red nights into the dark precise day I don't know what a vertical night looks like, or a precise day.
but indifference remains and marks everything, I don't know what indifference looks like, but I did wonder if it lifts its leg when it marks.
the turn of a spade and those who turn it. Cliché. I do know what that looks like, but I couldn't figure out why indifference was marking the turn of the spade. I did get that the gravediggers don't care, but I had to work for it.
Definitely we all die. But mostly as memory. Wait, what? We all definitely die as memory?

