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Lost at Sea
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02-19-2015, 05:01 PM
Thank you Chris for your warm welcome and thoughtful suggestions. I went ahead and revised the poem bearing in mind what you said while attempting to add some more depth to it. I did not change "crystalline sheet" because I believe (please correct me if I'm wrong) crystalline can mean something that resembles crystal, which I think is a fair description of a mirror.
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