02-19-2015, 11:57 AM
Hello mongolfiere,
Good to see you have been working
I suggest that as a drill you try expressing the meaning of each verse in as few words as you can.
I shut out the world for you;
to silence the verbal bashing
for fear of your heart fading.
Yet you see right through me
Verse three is quite a ramble, it melted my interest.
Take care,
John
Good to see you have been working
I suggest that as a drill you try expressing the meaning of each verse in as few words as you can.
I shut out the world for you;
to silence the verbal bashing
for fear of your heart fading.
Yet you see right through me
Verse three is quite a ramble, it melted my interest.
Take care,
John

