Your Window
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Hello mongolfiere,

Good to see you have been working

I suggest that as a drill you try expressing the meaning of each verse in as few words as you can.

I shut out the world for you;
to silence the verbal bashing
for fear of your heart fading.
Yet you see right through me

Verse three is quite a ramble, it melted my interest.

Take care,
John
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Your Window - by mongolfiere - 02-19-2015, 10:11 AM
RE: Your Window - by ellajam - 02-19-2015, 11:31 AM
RE: Your Window - by Deadrise - 02-19-2015, 11:57 AM
RE: Your Window - by indarican - 02-19-2015, 10:58 PM



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