white butterflies
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(02-19-2015, 06:31 AM)monmac Wrote:  The edit version works better. The image is good as l know exactly what u mean can see it now. It is like they are just learning to fly. So I was going to suggest
As if learning
But me thinks forget id probably better
Did u mean a small aba rhyme?

I don't like rhyme in haiku but couldn't avoid it here. Smile
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white butterflies - by just mercedes - 02-18-2015, 01:30 PM
RE: white butterflies - by Tiger the Lion - 02-18-2015, 01:52 PM
RE: white butterflies - by just mercedes - 02-18-2015, 01:58 PM
RE: white butterflies - by billy - 02-18-2015, 04:49 PM
RE: white butterflies - by rayheinrich - 02-25-2015, 06:46 PM
RE: white butterflies - by monmac - 02-19-2015, 06:31 AM
RE: white butterflies - by just mercedes - 02-19-2015, 07:53 AM
RE: white butterflies - by 71degrees - 02-27-2015, 01:29 AM



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