02-19-2015, 07:07 AM
(02-12-2015, 12:04 PM)Norimeknowreason Wrote: I stole red roses from the neighbor's garden to give to you (Maybe change To give to you - for you, I feel like the flow is off)This poem makes me want to know more. I was straight to the point and fresh. I have only read it once and its already stuck in my head. Very nicely done.
but you threw all those red roses away.
Now I'm left broken-hearted and my neighbor and I,
we haven't spoken in days. (I think the we can be omitted)

