02-18-2015, 09:51 AM
Hello Shootthestar25
I enjoyed the emotion in your piece.
*If you are not interested in meter please disregard what follows*
I found it difficult to develop a flow while reading your poem. I was introduced to meter a short while ago and have been applying it to the few free form pieces that I have put together.
It has been difficult, but worth the effort. At the very least I am becoming more aware of the mechanics of poetry.
I fussed with your first stanza for 15 minutes as an exercise for my self and was able to incorporate meter without altering much of what you wrote.
Give it a try if you are interested.
Take care,
John
I enjoyed the emotion in your piece.
*If you are not interested in meter please disregard what follows*
I found it difficult to develop a flow while reading your poem. I was introduced to meter a short while ago and have been applying it to the few free form pieces that I have put together.
It has been difficult, but worth the effort. At the very least I am becoming more aware of the mechanics of poetry.
I fussed with your first stanza for 15 minutes as an exercise for my self and was able to incorporate meter without altering much of what you wrote.
Give it a try if you are interested.
Take care,
John