02-18-2015, 01:24 AM
(02-18-2015, 01:06 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:That makes a big difference to me, I like it.(02-17-2015, 11:39 PM)tectak Wrote:What about:(02-17-2015, 10:30 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote: Urine-sane....apart from that it's just the "and".Not worth killing yourself over.
Outside a piss yellow asylum,
suicide taints the sunflowers-
and ocher canvases other or ochre?Gotcher!
that could have been.
Best,
Tom
Urine-sane
Outside a piss yellow asylum,
suicide taints the sunflowers-
alas, the ochre canvases
that could have been.
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