2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month

[ChristopherSea]

Urine-sane

Outside a piss yellow asylum,
suicide taints the sunflowers-
and ocher canvases other or ochre?Gotcher!
that could have been.

....apart from that it's just the "and".Not worth killing yourself over.
Best,
Tom

What about:

Urine-sane

Outside a piss yellow asylum,
suicide taints the sunflowers-
alas, the ochre canvases
that could have been.