02-14-2015, 02:59 AM
Thank you A.B.,
I see what you are saying. Surely, I could take a more laconic approach and cut out whatever is unnecessary. I really like your re-write of my poem, it is good and gives me many thoughts to ponder away on. I do appreciate minimalism, but am oft caught between trying to get everything I want in and brevity. I think you are right, somehow this will be better if it is more condensed.
Thank you again, my train of thought is beginning to chug along!
Cheers, S.M.
I see what you are saying. Surely, I could take a more laconic approach and cut out whatever is unnecessary. I really like your re-write of my poem, it is good and gives me many thoughts to ponder away on. I do appreciate minimalism, but am oft caught between trying to get everything I want in and brevity. I think you are right, somehow this will be better if it is more condensed.
Thank you again, my train of thought is beginning to chug along!
Cheers, S.M.