I Stole For You

[Mitul Yadav]

This brought a smile on my face. I dunno...the words seemed cluttered, but there was a certain rhythm in the original piece. Also, i think it is not all about cutting on words, atleast in this case. Here, the excess words speak a lot about the author, who comes across as a hopeless romantic, as opposed to the silent and serious kinds, as suggested in the edits. The quirky sentence structure gives a lovesick and pop-punk feel. In my opinion, it was pretty.