Molossus
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This poem is in the aptly named metrical angst genre. Idk, have at it if you will.

There I stood,
basking in the shadow of Molossus.
The promise of my greatness trickled like
the cadence of a brook that passed through stones.
I kenned the slither of the snakes and found them wanting,
And for now I knew no fear.
 
I'd found a cool rift of asylum hidden in the Earth,
and there I quaffed from silhouettes and gloom
until I’d found the very essence of a beat beyond a break.
I swelled, almost content, when in my interplay with shade
I nearly made the spirits burn.

Certain that I’d found a recipe for whoops and war cries,
I promptly told the apparitions it was me,
Me! Me! Me!
The sole exalted priest of verse who found molossus.
But yet, it was all travesty and shame,
a pigeon pecking crumbs inside a paper bag,
announced my failure in a pin prick of a shrill
and deflated all my dropsy.
The Me's were nothing like a democratic
umph of three but were, instead, a tawdry sound
which fell in an abrupt crescendo of three greedy notes.
The glister of the shade was gone,
And I babbled like a barking dog
cursing unseen imprecations.
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Molossus - by Brownlie - 02-09-2015, 02:29 PM
RE: Molossus - by ellajam - 02-09-2015, 11:44 PM
RE: Molossus - by Brownlie - 02-10-2015, 10:29 PM



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