the pond - Trying Haiku

[monmac]

Thank you for the comments. I was worki g on a haiku. I really like this form so am ttrying it.
please see edited version below

Dry baked water edge,
skimmer breaks nature's mirror.
Dissolving landscape


And thank u for the welcome

Hi, monmac, welcome.
I don't know if you're aiming at haiku or a short poem, but either way it's a bit wordy. Crystal, shaped and possibly smooth don't seem necessary. The image is fairly common, you may want to consider shuffling the lines for more pop.

Glad to have you here, hope you enjoy the site.

Crystal clear water ripples
From a sun dried smooth shaped stone
Deftly skimmed across