Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris)
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(02-05-2015, 10:26 PM)ellajam Wrote:  Securely planted, deep in place
atop a solid granite ledge,
attached into the mountain face
securely planted deep. In place
of freedom, settled in its space,
an eaglet with no urge to fledge,
securely planted, deep in place,
atop a solid granite ledge.
Love this. Your words paint a perfect picture of that little eaglet, settled in its space. Fairly new to critiquing, but nothing I would change! Grace
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Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris) - by ellajam - 02-05-2015, 10:26 PM
RE: Rooted - by billy - 02-05-2015, 10:55 PM
RE: Rooted - by ellajam - 02-05-2015, 11:23 PM
RE: Rooted - by ChristopherSea - 02-06-2015, 12:01 AM
RE: Rooted - by ellajam - 02-06-2015, 12:05 AM
RE: Rooted - by ChristopherSea - 02-06-2015, 12:40 AM
RE: Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris) - by ellajam - 02-06-2015, 02:57 AM
RE: Rooted - by Grace - 02-06-2015, 03:12 AM
RE: Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris) - by ellajam - 02-06-2015, 03:31 AM
RE: Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris) - by Grace - 02-06-2015, 03:58 AM
RE: Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris) - by Grace - 02-06-2015, 06:11 AM
RE: Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris) - by ellajam - 02-06-2015, 06:31 AM



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