Rooted (edit 1, billy, chris)

[ChristopherSea]

I like it, but I am thinking that there may be a better word then 'solid'. Especially, as it is in the refrain. I suppose it's the double modification of a noun (ledge) thing that kind of makes it feel like a filler. If we do use two adjectives, they need to be highly significant. Solid implies security, stability, etc. However, is their a better word? Of course, I don't have one! Maybe this is not a problem for you. See what you think./Chris

Thanks, Chris, I'll certainly think on it and see if I can come up with something. It's true, what would granite be if not solid. Thanks for pointing out the flaw.


atop a slab of granite ledge. might work, just as bad? Now I'm not so sure I like atop.

'aloft or upon a slab of granite ledge' may sound nice