02-06-2015, 12:01 AM
I like it, but I am thinking that there may be a better word then 'solid'. Especially, as it is in the refrain. I suppose it's the double modification of a noun (ledge) thing that kind of makes it feel like a filler. If we do use two adjectives, they need to be highly significant. Solid implies security, stability, etc. However, is their a better word? Of course, I don't have one! Maybe this is not a problem for you. See what you think./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris