Villanelle 1st try -Edit

Villanelle 1st try -Edit

Tiger the Lion Offline

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02-05-2015, 01:08 PM

Thanks Merc and Milo. The "blues" line definitely needs fixing. Good news is I knew it all along, bad news is I got lazy.
I will have another look at the "giddy" line too.
I'm kind of partial to "thin disguise" I'm wearing one now!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Paul

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Villanelle 1st try -Edit - by Tiger the Lion - 02-05-2015, 10:51 AM

RE: Villanelle 1st try - by just mercedes - 02-05-2015, 11:13 AM

RE: Villanelle 1st try - by milo - 02-05-2015, 11:37 AM

RE: Villanelle 1st try - by Tiger the Lion - 02-05-2015, 01:08 PM

RE: Villanelle 1st try -Edit - by Tiger the Lion - 02-06-2015, 12:13 AM

RE: Villanelle 1st try -Edit - by februarious - 02-06-2015, 09:35 AM

RE: Villanelle 1st try -Edit - by Tiger the Lion - 02-07-2015, 08:13 AM

RE: Villanelle 1st try -Edit - by februarious - 02-08-2015, 06:26 AM

RE: Villanelle 1st try -Edit - by just mercedes - 02-07-2015, 08:46 AM

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