Eyes to See

[bena]

Hmm. Yes, this is definitely prose, not sure how poetic it is though. You have flowery language, but that doesn't make it poetic. It seems to me to be more of philosophical prose than poetic. It is interesting in the thoughts presented, but it does seem very much to be a soup of Nietzsche, Plato, and Hegel vomited onto a page. I'm not sure how qualified I am to give you much input into improvement. Sorry.

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