02-03-2015, 09:46 PM
I like "I blew the dust off my memories to see they hadn't changed. " That line stood out to me. I thought the first and third stanza sounded pretty smooth, not sure about the last line in the third.
I have been wondering some of the same things you mentioned as a novice. How much of the technical stuff do you really need to know if you are only writing for yourself. (Dale you make it sound so very serious.)I have also checked out the practice threads and it all looks really intense.
I have been wondering some of the same things you mentioned as a novice. How much of the technical stuff do you really need to know if you are only writing for yourself. (Dale you make it sound so very serious.)I have also checked out the practice threads and it all looks really intense.