Chomo Lungma
#6
Do you need to memtion Everest in the first line.
Could something like
Solitude on her slopes
Or solitude on the mountain

You title has it covered already

also you do not keep to the 5/7/5
Do you find this restrictive?
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Chomo Lungma - by srijantje - 02-02-2015, 03:18 PM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by Erthona - 02-02-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by just mercedes - 02-02-2015, 04:08 PM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by srijantje - 02-02-2015, 05:06 PM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by bena - 02-02-2015, 11:20 PM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by monmac - 02-03-2015, 08:35 AM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by RiverNotch - 02-03-2015, 08:44 AM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by bena - 02-03-2015, 11:07 AM
RE: Chomo Lungma - by srijantje - 02-03-2015, 01:16 PM



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