01-31-2015, 03:15 AM
Brenkin, First and foremost, do not capitalize every line if you are not going to punctuate. You will end up with one long run-on sentence. Here's some quick punctuation suggestions:
(01-31-2015, 01:31 AM)Brenkin Wrote: A Day Less Than a CenturyStart with something like this and edit accordingly. You could forego all punctuation and use line breaks or white space to achieve caesura as well. Good luck./Chris
It feels like a day less than a century
when I last called your name<.>
I blew the dust off my memories
to see they hadn't changed<.>
I could close my eyes this very minute
and visualize your visage<.>
Although it’s been a lifetime<,>
the image looks so vivid
and in the back of my mind<.>
Your touch<,> it still remains
along with the sound of your voice<.>
The thoughts will not decay<.>
Your absence seems endless<.>
All I have left are memories of senses<.>
It’s senseless<.>
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

