A Day Less Than A Century

[Brenkin]

I would fix the punctuation, but the idea is a good one. The phrase "A day less than a century" has no sense that it refers to.

How would you go about fixing the punctuation? I've been writing poetry for a couple of years but only really for my own enjoyment.

The phrase "A Day Less Than A Century" was intended to refer to the sense of Time, a sense that humans may or may not have. Perhaps it didn't evoke the message well enough.