01-30-2015, 08:22 PM
some really good lines in the poem;
as the flesh of the waters tear into the shore makes the water more solid than fluid and gives it life.
Walls of chalk built by giants long-dead reminds me of Dover and an image i know from the Calais to Dover ferry.
the opening line gives a great image of white capped waves.
my main problem was that i couldn't get a handle on the poem as a whole. i know the title tells of peace but it didn't help me much. of course it could be me that's not firing on all cylinders. wish i could be of more help
as the flesh of the waters tear into the shore makes the water more solid than fluid and gives it life.
Walls of chalk built by giants long-dead reminds me of Dover and an image i know from the Calais to Dover ferry.
the opening line gives a great image of white capped waves.
my main problem was that i couldn't get a handle on the poem as a whole. i know the title tells of peace but it didn't help me much. of course it could be me that's not firing on all cylinders. wish i could be of more help