01-30-2015, 12:38 AM
71, There is some lovely sentiment herein. Even after multiple readings, that 'shine' keeps turning to 'shrine' for me! Nonetheless, still keeping with your painting motif, 'gloss' may work better. The Paul Klee reference may not be helping the poem that much for the reader, but it may have deep meaning for you both. Something like a 'portrait,' albeit not a still life or 'composition' could work within the poem. See what you think./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris