01-29-2015, 05:36 PM
Ah, now that's justice 
Rusty, have a good read through some of the meter threads on the site because it's a shame not to improve your natural ear as much as possible. You tell a good yarn, but just be careful of mangling some of your grammar to fit the rhyme. You're in charge of the poem, not the rhymes -- and if a rhyme doesn't fit, change it.
I don't know if it's an urban myth or not, about the family who decided to build their barbecue fire with oleander one night... didn't end well... the flowers are pretty though.
Good to have you on board, flannie and all.
Rusty, have a good read through some of the meter threads on the site because it's a shame not to improve your natural ear as much as possible. You tell a good yarn, but just be careful of mangling some of your grammar to fit the rhyme. You're in charge of the poem, not the rhymes -- and if a rhyme doesn't fit, change it.
I don't know if it's an urban myth or not, about the family who decided to build their barbecue fire with oleander one night... didn't end well... the flowers are pretty though.
Good to have you on board, flannie and all.
It could be worse