Galaxy
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Who are you? Are you a constellation? Orion? Watching the happenings on Earth from millions of yeas ago. I thought you were God first reading. It sounds vey lonesome out there. Is space true freedom? This is an interesting idea, watcher being watched and the watcher is stars but I feel like you are kind of holding yourself at arms length but then again maybe a space poem need.....well space. I think you have captured an emptiness and desolation that I imagine space would be. Here am I sitting in a tin can, Bowie kind of thing.
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Galaxy - by Orion - 10-07-2014, 12:13 AM
RE: Galaxy - by rowens - 10-07-2014, 12:52 AM
RE: Galaxy - by ellajam - 10-07-2014, 01:10 AM
RE: Galaxy - by gypsyrose - 10-13-2014, 04:27 AM
RE: Galaxy - by shootthestar25 - 01-03-2015, 02:43 PM
RE: Galaxy - by Kubla Khan - 01-13-2015, 04:47 PM
RE: Galaxy - by Kubla Khan - 01-13-2015, 10:40 PM
RE: Galaxy - by Grace - 01-14-2015, 05:33 AM
RE: Galaxy - by SilvanusNath - 01-14-2015, 06:38 AM
RE: Galaxy - by RiverNotch - 01-27-2015, 06:09 PM
RE: Galaxy - by Rustymetal - 01-29-2015, 08:58 AM



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