Peace

[just mercedes]

Hi - I like the contrasts here; inside and outdoors, light and dark, and the response to watching violence.


After a few beers, the game, and a couple laughs at the bar, a couple of laughs
the boys and I [like to] head down to the pond for some midnight shinny.
 
Beneath a black sky and some old flood lights, this gives me bodies appearing and vanishing as they move out of the light - I like it, although wonder if 'between' or some other descriptive of place would be better than 'beneath'
we fight over rubber with wooden sticks in falling snow, a bit jumbled - the rubber has wooden sticks?
warmed by the thoughtless sweat of war. Great line, packs a punch for the finish.

Thanks for posting this - I enjoyed seeing the cameo.