FDA approved poem
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Thumbs up on this one. Just enough is said, just enough is left unsaid. I wanted to smile at its cleverness but then felt bad smiling because of the subject matter, and I like that tension. Nicely done.
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The howling beast is back.
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FDA approved poem - by Tiger the Lion - 01-28-2015, 09:23 AM
RE: FDA approved poem - by Wjames - 01-28-2015, 10:04 AM
RE: FDA approved poem - by Erthona - 01-28-2015, 12:36 PM
RE: FDA approved poem - by just mercedes - 01-28-2015, 02:02 PM
RE: FDA approved poem - by justcloudy - 01-28-2015, 08:20 PM
RE: FDA approved poem - by Tiger the Lion - 01-28-2015, 11:01 PM



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