One Night in Wales
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I enjoyed this poem. I am a novice writer so as I read comments I keep finding things I will have to look up like iambs and blank verse, I cant give you any of those comments, I liked that the poem read in snatches of feelings and impressions that resonate for me with that euphoric time when a new partner has totally taken over your mind. You have a very feminine style its almost like viewing under water or a dream state.
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One Night in Wales - by Universalchild - 12-30-2014, 05:29 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by somnium - 01-02-2015, 01:22 PM
RE: One Night in Wales - by 71degrees - 01-03-2015, 01:33 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by Erthona - 01-09-2015, 08:12 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by Universalchild - 05-06-2016, 06:13 PM
RE: One Night in Wales - by bena - 01-09-2015, 10:11 AM
RE: One Night in Wales - by Rustymetal - 01-28-2015, 06:33 PM
RE: One Night in Wales - by februarious - 02-06-2015, 09:27 AM



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