01-28-2015, 06:33 PM
I enjoyed this poem. I am a novice writer so as I read comments I keep finding things I will have to look up like iambs and blank verse, I cant give you any of those comments, I liked that the poem read in snatches of feelings and impressions that resonate for me with that euphoric time when a new partner has totally taken over your mind. You have a very feminine style its almost like viewing under water or a dream state.

