01-26-2015, 11:08 AM
I retract my statement about "fan poetry" as far as it applies to this poem. I certainly do stand by my previous statement that if a writer is going to change the characteristics of a well known myth it is going to require much more than half a page to do so. Certainly if one is going to base a poem on such an obscure quote as was used, then it should be footnoted and presented in totalem.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

